Beginings( ch.1 of area 52 story)

This is a test chapter. i started this story when he was actualy at area 52, but now this will be the first chapter(i might not put this in it. so all that you see here war made up as i want along.(this is weird, cuz my english teacher still hasnt given me the whole story from my journal. this journal isn't totaly serious, i mean for it to be kind of funny

John stood up from hes meal of pancakes and went to go get the news paper from outside. he squinted his eyes as the sun glared in his eyes. it was a normal weekend day, just like any other. kids were runnng around, a few dogs playing in yards, and peopel out enjoying the fresh air. john jumped as something wet hit him. he looked around to find the thing that had soaked him. the sprinklers in the neighbors lawn had turned on. the man nextdoor waved and shouted an apolidgy. john waved back, saying it was fine. he took i sip of his coffe and went back inside. he grasped the remote in hishand and turned on the tv. there were telemerials( or whatever their called, it muchg pe paid programing)on every channel. "this is crap" john said speaking to nothing. on channel 2 there was the news. he switched to that. the news reporter appeared on the screen sitting at a desk, with paper and water next to him. "yesterday something strange happened in the desert of canada. oh wait... not canada i meant to say florida. a large fire ball appeared in the sky, and shattered into billions of peices, landing in a goverment protected area. here we have bill gnop(time out. read gnop backwards. its pong. gnop was devoloped by bungie to bring pong back from the dead. it was a huge success. it started them on their way to eventually creating a great game called *halo* then also made *halo2* and some other cool games. well back to the story. and note this wont be in the full version when i post it.)". the tv switched to a guy in the middle of a desert and he was talking to some people. " bill gnop here, reporting live from the forests of florida" "i have a few witnesses here they saw the event." he turned to a lady asking "hello kind sir what did you see?" the lady turned red and rehtorted"im not a man you foo, im a lady, and i saw this big explosion in the sky"she pointed" and it split in to a ton of pieces and landed over there." before he turned away she smacked him in the face with her large purse. "ow that hurt!" he yelled at her, chasing her as she ran. before there was any more information there was a cirmercial, and john switched off the tv.-end

you like it? im gonna go take a break and il post more another day. next chptr will be called" the call" remember you can email me at- scrabble06@gmail.com or post your coments here. :) have a nice day.