Thursday, March 16, 2006

chapter 2-3 of the area 52 story

Hey all. i got my story from my english teacher to day. :). im going to add another chapter before this one, but i dont feel like writing it right now. with out any further time-wasting, here it is.

Chapter 2" grim meeting "

John walked into the room, the lights flickerd then darkened. an aline jumped out of the corner and flew twards his head. he could feel ite reaking breath hit his fave at it attacked itsself to him. he could feel its drill like teeth booring into his forehead as it tried to reack his brain. one of its scaly, cold feet his nose and went into his left eye. he hit it several times with his fist, but nothing happened. so john shot it with his pump shotgun. it fell to the ground, dead. john collected a tissue sample, then applied a healing serum to the node and left eye. the deep gouges almost immediatley healed. through the partly shattered glass john saw one of the team mates, but this time the alien was victorious, it tore off the squad members head. john yelled at it and gave it a nice souviner right between the eyes.


End of chapter 2.


that was the first chapter i wrote for this story. the other day i looked at all of these and thought " i should extend these chapters to longer lenghts.". down worry, i am going to, after i finish it, and read over it with my brother garrett. we are still kind of working on the t-shite company, although my sister,rachel, needs to give my btother a website to get the shirts from. rachel in you read this and havent sent garrett the link, consider your self fired. im such a nice little brother/president of company, dont you think? any way... the chapeters, im my mind atleast, seem to get better from here on out. next chapter seems alot like this chapter.


Chapter 3 " glowey shmowey, now die "


out of the corner it crawled akwardly. the alien john had shot with his plasma cannon. it was missing just about half its thin body. what was reamning of it was covered in its green-tinted red blood(whoa time out... my english teacher underlined this and put a "?" above it. this means that the blood is read, but it's also kind of a shiny green too). its forehead and palm started to glow. john immediatley knew it was trying to transfer its conchience into him. john raised his pistol and shot the ailen in the forehead, right from where the glowing spot was. the alien let out a loud shreik and fell to the floor. john walked over to it, kicked it , and shot it again just to make sure it was dead. he put the pistol back in its holster and swung his plasma cannon around his shoulder, from the spot on him back where it had been charging.pulling out his tapr recorder he made an entry "after the last room, i am the last member of my squad that is alive."

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Monday, March 13, 2006

Beginings( ch.1 of area 52 story)

This is a test chapter. i started this story when he was actualy at area 52, but now this will be the first chapter(i might not put this in it. so all that you see here war made up as i want along.(this is weird, cuz my english teacher still hasnt given me the whole story from my journal. this journal isn't totaly serious, i mean for it to be kind of funny

John stood up from hes meal of pancakes and went to go get the news paper from outside. he squinted his eyes as the sun glared in his eyes. it was a normal weekend day, just like any other. kids were runnng around, a few dogs playing in yards, and peopel out enjoying the fresh air. john jumped as something wet hit him. he looked around to find the thing that had soaked him. the sprinklers in the neighbors lawn had turned on. the man nextdoor waved and shouted an apolidgy. john waved back, saying it was fine. he took i sip of his coffe and went back inside. he grasped the remote in hishand and turned on the tv. there were telemerials( or whatever their called, it muchg pe paid programing)on every channel. "this is crap" john said speaking to nothing. on channel 2 there was the news. he switched to that. the news reporter appeared on the screen sitting at a desk, with paper and water next to him. "yesterday something strange happened in the desert of canada. oh wait... not canada i meant to say florida. a large fire ball appeared in the sky, and shattered into billions of peices, landing in a goverment protected area. here we have bill gnop(time out. read gnop backwards. its pong. gnop was devoloped by bungie to bring pong back from the dead. it was a huge success. it started them on their way to eventually creating a great game called *halo* then also made *halo2* and some other cool games. well back to the story. and note this wont be in the full version when i post it.)". the tv switched to a guy in the middle of a desert and he was talking to some people. " bill gnop here, reporting live from the forests of florida" "i have a few witnesses here they saw the event." he turned to a lady asking "hello kind sir what did you see?" the lady turned red and rehtorted"im not a man you foo, im a lady, and i saw this big explosion in the sky"she pointed" and it split in to a ton of pieces and landed over there." before he turned away she smacked him in the face with her large purse. "ow that hurt!" he yelled at her, chasing her as she ran. before there was any more information there was a cirmercial, and john switched off the tv.-end

you like it? im gonna go take a break and il post more another day. next chptr will be called" the call" remember you can email me at- scrabble06@gmail.com or post your coments here. :) have a nice day.

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Beginings( ch.1 of area 52 story)

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Tuesday, March 07, 2006

Hi again

Its been soo long since I posted on this bloc too. IM working on an area 52 story in English class as of now(I have stopped the other one for a while but I will finish it! "clapping and cheering"). Ill have to ask my English teacher for it, and it is currently on its 12th page :)("more cheers and whistling"). Ill post it another time

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