chapter 2-3 of the area 52 story
Hey all. i got my story from my english teacher to day. :). im going to add another chapter before this one, but i dont feel like writing it right now. with out any further time-wasting, here it is.
Chapter 2" grim meeting "
John walked into the room, the lights flickerd then darkened. an aline jumped out of the corner and flew twards his head. he could feel ite reaking breath hit his fave at it attacked itsself to him. he could feel its drill like teeth booring into his forehead as it tried to reack his brain. one of its scaly, cold feet his nose and went into his left eye. he hit it several times with his fist, but nothing happened. so john shot it with his pump shotgun. it fell to the ground, dead. john collected a tissue sample, then applied a healing serum to the node and left eye. the deep gouges almost immediatley healed. through the partly shattered glass john saw one of the team mates, but this time the alien was victorious, it tore off the squad members head. john yelled at it and gave it a nice souviner right between the eyes.
End of chapter 2.
that was the first chapter i wrote for this story. the other day i looked at all of these and thought " i should extend these chapters to longer lenghts.". down worry, i am going to, after i finish it, and read over it with my brother garrett. we are still kind of working on the t-shite company, although my sister,rachel, needs to give my btother a website to get the shirts from. rachel in you read this and havent sent garrett the link, consider your self fired. im such a nice little brother/president of company, dont you think? any way... the chapeters, im my mind atleast, seem to get better from here on out. next chapter seems alot like this chapter.
Chapter 3 " glowey shmowey, now die "
out of the corner it crawled akwardly. the alien john had shot with his plasma cannon. it was missing just about half its thin body. what was reamning of it was covered in its green-tinted red blood(whoa time out... my english teacher underlined this and put a "?" above it. this means that the blood is read, but it's also kind of a shiny green too). its forehead and palm started to glow. john immediatley knew it was trying to transfer its conchience into him. john raised his pistol and shot the ailen in the forehead, right from where the glowing spot was. the alien let out a loud shreik and fell to the floor. john walked over to it, kicked it , and shot it again just to make sure it was dead. he put the pistol back in its holster and swung his plasma cannon around his shoulder, from the spot on him back where it had been charging.pulling out his tapr recorder he made an entry "after the last room, i am the last member of my squad that is alive."
Chapter 2" grim meeting "
John walked into the room, the lights flickerd then darkened. an aline jumped out of the corner and flew twards his head. he could feel ite reaking breath hit his fave at it attacked itsself to him. he could feel its drill like teeth booring into his forehead as it tried to reack his brain. one of its scaly, cold feet his nose and went into his left eye. he hit it several times with his fist, but nothing happened. so john shot it with his pump shotgun. it fell to the ground, dead. john collected a tissue sample, then applied a healing serum to the node and left eye. the deep gouges almost immediatley healed. through the partly shattered glass john saw one of the team mates, but this time the alien was victorious, it tore off the squad members head. john yelled at it and gave it a nice souviner right between the eyes.
End of chapter 2.
that was the first chapter i wrote for this story. the other day i looked at all of these and thought " i should extend these chapters to longer lenghts.". down worry, i am going to, after i finish it, and read over it with my brother garrett. we are still kind of working on the t-shite company, although my sister,rachel, needs to give my btother a website to get the shirts from. rachel in you read this and havent sent garrett the link, consider your self fired. im such a nice little brother/president of company, dont you think? any way... the chapeters, im my mind atleast, seem to get better from here on out. next chapter seems alot like this chapter.
Chapter 3 " glowey shmowey, now die "
out of the corner it crawled akwardly. the alien john had shot with his plasma cannon. it was missing just about half its thin body. what was reamning of it was covered in its green-tinted red blood(whoa time out... my english teacher underlined this and put a "?" above it. this means that the blood is read, but it's also kind of a shiny green too). its forehead and palm started to glow. john immediatley knew it was trying to transfer its conchience into him. john raised his pistol and shot the ailen in the forehead, right from where the glowing spot was. the alien let out a loud shreik and fell to the floor. john walked over to it, kicked it , and shot it again just to make sure it was dead. he put the pistol back in its holster and swung his plasma cannon around his shoulder, from the spot on him back where it had been charging.pulling out his tapr recorder he made an entry "after the last room, i am the last member of my squad that is alive."
